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Fellowship TESOL PHD, Korean Raised in Africa

Placeholder ImageFellowship TESOL PHD, Korean Raised in Africa

Probably the single strongest aspect of my application to the University of XXXX Fellowship Program is the fact that I am a Korean woman who was raised mostly in Tanzania and Kenya in addition to living in South Korea and the United States. I have als…

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Masters Behavior Analysis, Cuban

A bilingual, Cuban woman who was raised in Miami, English has long been my first language while Spanish remains very dear to my heart. I hope to earn the Master of Arts in Professional Behavior Analysis (MBA) at Florida Institute of Technology so that I will be able to advance professionally and mak…

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OT, Masters of Occupational Therapy, Nigerian

My current work has involved a significant amount of contact with Occupational Therapists and their child patients who suffer learning and communication disabilities. I have been deeply impressed with the dedication of the therapists and the effectiveness of their painstaking work. In my country of …

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PHD Education, Leadership, Technology, Cambodian

I am Cambodian and was born on the Thai-Cambodian border during the rule of the infamous Khmer Rouge and was raised there in a refugee camp for the first years of my life. The regime had murdered all those they considered to be ‘intellectuals’, this description included all those who wore glasses an…

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PHD Social Work, Ethnicity, Language, Religion, Chinese

I ask for acceptance to XXXX University’s PHD Program in Social Work because I want to help people in my native country, China, the vulnerable, those who have been discriminated against. This is my professional purpose and it is very much grounded in the historical circumstances of me and my family.…

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MPH, Hispanic Woman, Fluent in Spanish

Architecture Masters, Urban Planning, Chinese

Your Master’s Program in Architecture program at XXXX University is my first choice for graduate school primarily because of your emphasis and vision in the areas of global sustainability and inclusiveness. I hope to excel as a graduate student at Colombia primarily because of my great passion and a…

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MS Accountancy, Vietnamese, Low GPA

I ask for admission to study towards the MS Degree in Accountancy at XXXX University for the simple reason that after an exhaustive investigation of available online programs, I have come to the conclusion that your Master’s Program in Accountancy is the best of its kind in the world, with both the …

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MPA, Public and Non-Profit Management, Ghana

My career and academic choices to date may not make me a typical candidate for this program, however my career path arose because of an urgent need to provide financial assistance to my family in Ghana and I now wish to change the course of my life to ‘make a difference’ rather than just make a livi…

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Masters Translation and Interpretation, Chinese

I ask for consideration for scholarship assistance in order to complete the MA Program in Translation and Interpretation at the XXXX Institute of International Studies at XXXX (MXXX) on the basis of my academic preparation, but most of all my volunteer and professional experience.  Over the course o…

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MPhil Economics, Microeconomics India

It wasn’t exactly like a lightening bolt, but something drastically changed my outlook on life and my vocational orientation. After four rigorous years of intense training in one of the toughest electrical engineering colleges in India, I underwent a type of vocational conversion experience. Attendi…

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MS Mechanical Engineering Asia

I wish to enroll in the mechanical engineering program at XXU, because it will provide the most excellent, inclusive and diverse program for me to achieve the highest level of competence as well as training in logic and creative thinking.  It is inclusive because it includes the top professors in th…

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MPH Public Health, Africa

In my service with the National Youth Service Corps Program in Nigeria, I soon discovered that minor ailments—some with fatal consequences—could have been prevented and many lives saved if it were not for the fact that those effected believed that they resulted from a curse by God. I was especially …

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Nurse Anesthesia, MSN, CRNA

No day is ever the same for me because my greatest joy in life is learning, finding my deepest satisfaction in progress, improvement, and life-long education. And it is this passion for becoming an increasingly successful nursing professional that is my greatest gift and strength. I trace this passi…

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MBA UK, Kuwaiti Applicant

As with many people in my native Kuwait, I am a business man who looks forward to a long and productive career doing business in the international arena. I want very much to attain my MBA in London because I see the UK as the principal center of international business and your academic institutions …

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Computer Science, Non-Degree Student

During my high school years, I would tell people that I was going to become a computer programmer. Yet, I went on to complete my undergraduate degree in business. And I have no regrets, because I now seek to become a computer scientist in order to dedicate myself to a lifetime of service to the busi…

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Linguistics (Applied MSc)

An extremely hard working and dedicated woman, I was able to graduate in the top 10% of my class at XXXX University with a degree in Psychology and a minor in the area of my professional dreams: Modern Languages. And I also earned a certificate in TESOL. Because of its international renown and the e…

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Engineering Systems Mgmt

I am a young woman who was born and raised in Morocco, and I have developed a deep and abiding appreciation for architecture, especially Muslim and Arab, for many years, which is why I pursued and completed my undergraduate studies in this field. I was also awarded a scholarship from UNESCO to study…

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Finance, Africa, Globalization

Born and raised until the age of 15 in Ethiopia, I am a young man who will always have Africa in his heart, despite the fact that I have now lived for 17 years in the USA. Eventually, I want to return to Ethiopia and work towards African economic development thorough greater participation and integr…

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Biology, Cell, Molecular

With my eye set on dentistry for some time, I see further preparation in the rigors of the physical sciences as the best way to make the most of dental school later on. I want to take the understanding that I have gained from my undergraduate study of the Life Sciences to the higher level of graduat…

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