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PHD Sociology Doctorate

For my entire adult life, I have maintained a conceptual continuity in my service to the community, an unswerving path to aiding the poor, sick and needy through dedicated nursing.  Providing compassionate care is as intrinsic to me as breathing, and yet, as a mature professional, I have found that …

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Computer Science, Art. Intel.

From the time I was introduced to the rudiments of Computer Science, I have excelled in the study of algorithms, programming languages and data processing.  Artificial Intelligence (AI), renewed within me my passion for even more advanced, complex problem solving, and provided me with intense analys…

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Psychology Certificate, Trauma, Veterans

I was once present when a friend, who was a military veteran, suffered extreme stress symptoms in the face of an ‘everyday’ situation. Naturally, I sought to offer immediate comfort and help my friend in this situation but it was also a spur to seek ways to help in a more enduring way and to assist …

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PsyD Clinical Forensic, Law, Expert Witness

I hope to be accepted to your program because my long term goal is to work as a clinical forensic psychologist performing psychological evaluations of competency to stand trial and assessments of diminished capacity. My paralegal education and experience working as a family and criminal law paralega…

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Psychology PHD Program, Clinical Practice, Latina

It is said that education and learning opens new doors to progress; my life to date bears witness to this truth. Born and raised in Ecuador, my journey towards the goal of becoming a clinical psychologist in private practice in the United States has been anchored by life experiences and the steps I …

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OT Masters, Poverty, Humble Origins

I am a Mexican woman whose life has been humble, with my people.  I grew up in a one room shack on the edge of the desert in a part of Arizona that looks much more like Mexico than the rest of the United States.  We had no bathroom, old clothes, shoes, and the other kids made fun of me at school.  I…

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OT Masters, Developmentally Challenged Children

I am a young man who was born and raised in Nigeria until the age of 16. I have being living in the U.S for the past nine years and I now feel that is the optimal time for me to pursue graduate study.  I am a caring, compassionate young man who is very devoted to the cause of service to others and I…

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OT Occupational Therapy Masters, Philippine Woman, Military, Iraq

I am a Philippine woman, born and raised in the Philippines and now living in Las Vegas. I speak fluent English, Tagalog and Cebuano. I have lived in the United States since I was 18 years old. I will gain my B.S. degree in Kinesiology in May 2011. My GPA is 3.2.

 At the age of 19, I enlisted in …

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MBA, Masters, Service Marketing, Development

Business development, management, and the technology that drives economic development are my principal loves in life. An extrovert, I am passionate about people, marketing, and business connections; I never tire of talking, plotting, scheming about how to make business grow. And I like to think that…

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MSPH Public Health Masters Asia, Turkey

I feel that I am a strong candidate for your program because of the mixture of public administration and health care in my academic and professional preparation. Growing up on the border between Turkey and Georgia helped form me to become a cosmopolitan and multilingual woman—Turkish, Georgian, Russ…

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MPH, Masters, Haiti Public Health

Having been born and raised in a tiny rural village in the backwoods of Haiti, I am well aware of hardship, which has made a dedicated and compassionate professional. At 39, I want very much to finally complete my dream of graduate school so that I can help my people, first those who have made it to…

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MPA, Masters Indian Dentist

I am a 27 year old Indian man. I was born and raised in India and have lived in the United States for 2 years. I am fluent in Hindi and English. I hold a bachelor’s degree in Dental Surgery with a GPA of 3.7. My most formative experience occurred when I undertook Community Service as a student. I wa…

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MPA, Masters, Immigrant, Africa

While I was born in the Bronx and raised in White Plains, New York, my soul is African. At 29, I am an especially serious and mature woman because of my deep concern for my African roots, my passionate dedication to African affairs: my sense of connection to the land of my ancestors where I have spe…

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Translation MA, Masters, Chinese, Cantonese

As a non-native, English speaker in Hong Kong currently in my final year of a competitive 4-year double-degree program in English Studies and English Education, I realize that translation plays a vital role in our acquisition of English as a second or even third language. If languages serve as build…

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MAcc, Masters Accounting, Latina

I would very much like to enroll in and complete your Online Master’s Program in Accounting so as to be qualified to assume greater levels of professional responsibility in the business world. As a woman and a Latina, born and raised in an impoverished area of the Bronx, achieving professional succe…

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HRM Development, African American, Management

I am a man of African-American heritage and this has helped me to understand the importance of the way in which very employee of any company is bound to have some interaction with a Human Resources department and will be vaguely aware that the department provides useful, indeed vital, functions with…

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HRM, Middle East, Turkey

I am Turkish born and raised in Istanbul. I hold a Bachelor’s degree in Education awarded by Marmara University. I speak Turkish, English and French. My goal is to obtain a degree in HR Management and to become an HR Consultant.

 I was employed for several years by a private company, initially …

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Masters Human Resources, Cultural Sensitivity

I do not have direct experience of HR work and so this application may be a little unusual. My fascination with HR has arisen and deepened through my associate and bachelor degree studies and through my own academic and professional experiences. I have become increasingly aware of the pivotal role p…

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HRM, Veterans, Medical, African American

I have found a great deal of fulfillment from my positions in the field of social work over the last 7-and-a-half years. Working primarily in the areas of veteran’s medical issues on the one hand, and a shelter for victims of domestic violence, on the other, I have gained increasing understanding an…

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Dual Masters, Crime and Justice, Public Administration

Personal Statement of Purpose for Study towards the Dual Masters Degrees in Crime and Justice and Public Administration at XXXX University Graduate School.

 Leaving Albania at only 13 was a sea change in my lifetime. Now, 11 years later, at the age of 24, I feel convinced that my own immigrant e…

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