I am a young woman who was born and raised in Morocco, and I have developed a deep and abiding appreciation for architecture, especially Muslim and Arab, for many years, which is why I pursued and completed my undergraduate studies in this field. I was also awarded a scholarship from UNESCO to study…
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PsyD Clinical Forensic, Law, Expert Witness
I hope to be accepted to your program because my long term goal is to work as a clinical forensic psychologist performing psychological evaluations of competency to stand trial and assessments of diminished capacity. My paralegal education and experience working as a family and criminal law paralega…
OT Masters, Poverty, Humble Origins
I am a Mexican woman whose life has been humble, with my people. I grew up in a one room shack on the edge of the desert in a part of Arizona that looks much more like Mexico than the rest of the United States. We had no bathroom, old clothes, shoes, and the other kids made fun of me at school. I…
OT Occupational Therapy Masters, Philippine Woman, Military, Iraq
I am a Philippine woman, born and raised in the Philippines and now living in Las Vegas. I speak fluent English, Tagalog and Cebuano. I have lived in the United States since I was 18 years old. I will gain my B.S. degree in Kinesiology in May 2011. My GPA is 3.2.
At the age of 19, I enlisted in …
MAcc, Masters Accounting, Latina
I would very much like to enroll in and complete your Online Master’s Program in Accounting so as to be qualified to assume greater levels of professional responsibility in the business world. As a woman and a Latina, born and raised in an impoverished area of the Bronx, achieving professional succe…
Sample Letter of Appeal for Graduate Admission
Sample Letter of Appeal for Graduate Admissions, Graduate Public Health Program, University of XXXX, College of Public Health, Department of Environmental and Occupational Health.
Respected Graduate Admissions Committee:
My application for admission to your program was declined and I would …
MSW Autobiographical Statement Sample, Chinese
I was hooked by my very first college class in psychology, most of all, learning how psychology related to me personally. As I learned more about myself, I came to better understand others as well, their emotions, sadness, anger, happiness, etc. I began to understand that human suffering is a univer…
Post Bachelors Education, Advanced Teaching Certificate Program
Born in Cleveland and raised in Ohio, Florida, and Indiana, I have made New York my home and very much wish to attain the required credentials to teach Biology at the Middle/High School level. I am currently an employee of Queens College where I serve as a Laboratory Safety Officer. Working with pro…
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All of the samples on this web site were written more than 2 years ago and all are anonymous.
My name is Dr. Robert Edinger. I help applicants to graduate school from all over the world.
Add Me as a Contact! on Skype. ID: DrRobertEdinger so that we can chat. Please note that I am not usually able to talk and I need your information in text form.
Free Consultations:
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