MS Business School Analytics Personal Purpose Statement
Introduction As a graduate student in Business at ____ University in Saudi Arabia, my academic journey has been driven by a passion for...
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Personal Statement Sample First Paragraph for the MBA
I like to think of myself as multifaceted, very progressive, and cosmopolitan Indian woman. I am a librarian devoted to public service; but I am also a businessperson in the way that I think and the aspirations that I have for the future. The University of XXX is my first choice for study towards the MBA for a variety of reasons, most of all the sheer excellence of your program, its breadth, depth, global thinking, and appreciation for diversity. I spent 3 months in New Zealand, visited your campus, and came away with a vast appreciation for your society, culture, and state-of-the-art business development. There is so much that I would be able to learn in New Zealand if accepted to your MBA Program; enriching me and helping to improve Indian society and business practices because of learning and implementing the strategies that I learn in New Zealand.
Born in Africa and raised mostly in Belgium, I spent years working for ING Bank and had achieved a most comfortable lifestyle. The strongest aspect of my application to your distinguished MBA Program at XXXX University is my effort on behalf of my continent of origin. In my next professional position with the African Development Bank’s Evaluation Team, I soon found myself on missions to remote parts of the Congo, Ghana, the Ivory Coast, and several other countries. Most of the parts of Africa that I visited in my position had been devastated by civil wars, political instability, and declining infrastructure. The slogan popular throughout this time “Rising Africa” often seemed quite far from reality on the ground, at least as I experienced it.
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