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Statement of Purpose Writing and Editing

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Graduate School Diversity Writing Service by Dr. Robert Edinger

All of the Statement samples on this web site were written more than 2 years ago and all are anonymous.


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Sample 1st Paragraph, DBA Applicant, Older

I am a highly experienced manager in financial services and wish to apply my substantial and hard-won knowledge and skills to teaching and research at the highest level. With this end in mind, I am seeking to join the doctorate program. I realize that I am not a typical applicant being 56 years of age but feel that I can bring highly relevant insights and ideas to the program borne of the length of my working life and the variety of roles that I have undertaken during it. I have been involved in numerous research projects during my working life and feel that I have the characteristics required of an excellent researcher. I have also mentored and tutored junior staff for much of my career and greatly enjoy sharing my knowledge and skills and in encouraging others to fulfil their academic and career potential. 


For as many people as possible, among those who provide me with adequate information, I carefully review it so as to produce what in my opinion would be a model first paragraph for your statement. The first paragraph is especially critical. Many experts suggest that many applicants are generally accepted or rejected on the basis of the first paragraph alone. I do several of these a day; about half of these applicants decide to become paying customers so that I can finish the statement. Then, they often recommend me to their friends who are also going through the application process. This is how I support myself and my son, laying something aside for his future. Let's get started working on your statement together, as a team!