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Statement of Purpose Writing and Editing

HRM, Veterans, Medical, African American

I have found a great deal of fulfillment from my positions in the field of social work over the last 7-and-a-half years. Working primarily in the areas of veteran’s medical issues on the one hand, and a shelter for victims of domestic violence, on the other, I have gained increasing understanding and appreciation of the importance of human resource management and I have decided that it is in this area that I wish to pursue graduate studies and continue to advance professionally. I feel strongly that my background as a social worker and administrative personnel will both be a very useful as a foundation for my career in HR.  I am an African-American woman who lives in Hawaii and my professional experiences have helped me to develop a profound sense of multicultural appreciation, which I see as of particularly critical importance to the HR professional in our increasingly multicultural societies of today.  

I was in the US army from 1987 through 1994 and worked in the area of Personnel. I appreciated this opportunity to serve my country and I have a special love, respect, and admiration for our veterans. I feel that I am an excellent candidate because I have the kind of extensive background and experience that would allow me to make important contributions to veterans’ abilities to reestablish themselves in civilian society and to pursue meaningful careers.

 After completing your Master’s Program, I plan to work towards a career with the military in their Department of Human Resources.  This field will allow me to use my knowledge and skills to help fellow veterans as well as active members of the military members.  I look forward to playing a direct, positive role in the lives of those who sacrifice so much for America.

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My name is Dr. Robert Edinger.  I help applicants to graduate school from all over the world. I would be honored to draft a model first paragraph for your Statement at no obligation in order to promote my service. Rapid Document Evaluation! I especially enjoy working on behalf of those clients whose stated long term goals represent a significant contribution to the progressive enrichment of humanity, particularly with respect to the Developing World, where I live with my only child Davy, and the cause to which I dedicated my life.

alt I appreciate that you take the time and effort to do this because you really like the first model paragraph that I have sent and you and you trust me to do a good job finishing your statement. I trust you as well to recommend me to your friends and colleagues if you are very pleased with your statement.