MSC Veterinary Medicine Personal Statement Editing Service
I have always wanted a career in veterinary medicine, combining my compassion for animals with my analytical skills and scientific...
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I invite you to fill out my Interview Form at this link. Even if you have a draft, the information on the interview form is often helpful and serves as the basis for me to make creative improvements to the statement. I spend more time with the statement for my premium service customers at US$299.00; this is especially true when it comes to making major contributions to creative ideas. My standard service at US$199.00 is for clients who already have a well-developed draft. My premium service is for clients who want my ultimate effort and further revision after they have a chance to make changes.
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Sample Personal Statement for the MS in Veterinary Medicine
A young Black woman from Gainesville, my dream is to become the absolute best veterinarian that I can. I love the wild and always have. Being active in nature with animals has been my first passion ever since I was a child. And it is not just nature, as I have always been drawn to livestock as well with a passionate love for animals both wild and domesticated. I really do not know why, at 23 I do not yet fully understand my heart all I know is the love that I feel for our animal companions. I see them as angels, gifts from God.
My first choice for graduate study is at the University of XXXX for several reasons. You have one of the best programs in the country and I dearly love my home state and still want to be close to my family as I depend on their support. We are a close family, and we support each other.
I am looking forward to studying Veterinary Medical Sciences because I so want to expand my knowledge concerning all phases of Animal Science. A hard worker, the greatest asset that I will bring to your program is my extreme enthusiasm and an ardent desire to learn.
Having finished my B.S. Degree in Animal Science this May 2018, I am keenly anxious to continue to graduate school. It is like I am an addict for study and learning and I have my heart set on going on to graduate study, especially in your remarkable program with an especially engaging curriculum that covers all my major interests. I am convinced that your program will prepare me to be the absolute best veterinarian that I can be.
It would be a profound honor for me and my family if I were admitted to your MS in veterinary medicine since XXU is also home to the largest biotechnology program in the world. My family would be so enormously proud of me, and I would also be proud of myself. I ask for the opportunity to demonstrate my capacity and courage to be one of the hardest working graduate students that has ever passed through your program. I am especially intrigued by the mysteries surrounding the deadly tropical diseases afflicting our livestock. I am hungry to study the entire spectrum from Wildlife and Zoo Animal Medicine, through Sports Medicine and Animal Health Training. Another thing that is so exciting to me about your program are your research efforts concerning the profoundly important connections between animal diseases, on the one hand, and our food supply on the other, and the related issues of diseases that are common to animals and humankind.
Being admitted to your program will enable me to become a highly skilled and successful small animal Veterinarian with a specialty in surgery. I am a very friendly person who loves people; one of a limited number of Black Americans who have struggled to the point where I can now communicate well in Spanish. I am a world citizen and a well-read, cosmopolitan woman who has traveled as much as her budget would allow. I get along well with everyone and put a priority on teamwork and communication. I have volunteer experience with several organizations, and I am well prepared to enter your program. This would empower me to make the greatest contribution that I might be able to make to my society and our planet: supporting animal health and welfare as it relates to human public health.
Thank you from the bottom of my big heart for your consideration of my application
Sample First Paragraph of the Personal Statement for Clinical Veterinary Program for Foreign Veterinarians
I am a young man from India who is extremely dedicated to the field of veterinary medicine. I finished my undergraduate studies in India and then came to America to complete my master's degree, graduating with my MS from the University of Delaware in 2011. Completing your distinguished program will allow me to practice veterinary medicine here in America; and I hope to distinguish myself both in your program and beyond because of my elevated level of motivation and intense work ethic.
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